The long scar running across her neck. Afraid to look anywhere else, i slowly step away.she starts to move after me as I try to walk faster. I turn around so I can see where I am going. I look back to see if she is still following me.
She is gone
I know the monster is not real, just a human under a costume but I still don’t know where she had gone. I’m running now. Away from the creature that haunted me. Away from the flickering lights of the house. Away from the creepy music from inside the house.
Trick or treat
I love what you did with paragraphing in this piece, Kyle! Very effective in creating an eerie mood.
I like how you really set the scene for this blog post it was very expressive. The Halloween theme was nice to considering its almost Halloween. Good job!